Fantastic beginning, Garen! I'm so intrigued! Also, I really admire the way you write about all those unknown things - mornrills, diessence, snags and fractures - and without feeling like you're breaking the narrative to explain them, I find I understand what they are. I found that in Rune's Folly too. Great writing!
This is really sick. I loved the POV shift there, really got me standing upright and especially the end. What hook, I really liked this first chapter here. Inspirational and very unique. I have no idea what I am in for but I am excited
Fantastic beginning, Garen! I'm so intrigued! Also, I really admire the way you write about all those unknown things - mornrills, diessence, snags and fractures - and without feeling like you're breaking the narrative to explain them, I find I understand what they are. I found that in Rune's Folly too. Great writing!
Thank you so much!! I really tried to avoid info dumping. I’m so glad it worked for you.
This is really sick. I loved the POV shift there, really got me standing upright and especially the end. What hook, I really liked this first chapter here. Inspirational and very unique. I have no idea what I am in for but I am excited
Oh you are giving me life with this comment! Thank you EMR!!! So glad to have you along for the journey.
Really good intro, can't wait to read more
Thank you! Glad to have you along for the journey.
Even better than the first time I read this!
Maybe because I know more about what's going on. I'm going to enjoy this re-read.
Thank you, Evelyn! I’m honored to have you along for the journey again!! 🖤