How do you do this every time?? Spectacular in the most disturbing way. It's hard to write flawed characters without making them stiff and you avoided it completely. Even though we know something awful is going to happen, we don't know what it will be. WOW. Exceptional.
Ok, first off, brilliant! Even more so because it’s inspired by a great song. Second, last month’s and next are also inspired by great songs. Very cool!
I’m so glad you’re into the songs! The Summer Music Series was kind of a happy accident, but I’m having a lot of fun writing it. Thank you so much for reading!
Fantastic! Howard is an amazing character, so repulsive and yet so sympathetic. I loved the devilish little girl with her lemonade stand, just for him.
How do you do this every time?? Spectacular in the most disturbing way. It's hard to write flawed characters without making them stiff and you avoided it completely. Even though we know something awful is going to happen, we don't know what it will be. WOW. Exceptional.
Lyndsey, thank you for this wonderful compliment. Truly! I’ve been feeling a little down lately and your kind words have helped. 💛💛💛
I’m glad! I mean it. I hope you get some time to recharge. You are so busy!
I loved this! It had me leaning forward while reading, totally engaged.
Appreciate your kind words. Thanks for reading!!
This is so good! Love all the strong, unexpected imagery—the soup, the pot, the lemons!
Glad you enjoyed it!!
Tormented Howard. Love the attention to detail. You make him come alive.
This is so well done.
Thank you so much!!
Ok, first off, brilliant! Even more so because it’s inspired by a great song. Second, last month’s and next are also inspired by great songs. Very cool!
I’m so glad you’re into the songs! The Summer Music Series was kind of a happy accident, but I’m having a lot of fun writing it. Thank you so much for reading!
Whoa… I can’t think of anything else just whoa
I’ll take whoa. 😀Thanks for reading!
It creeped me out!
Alright, mission accomplished! 😜
Totally unexpected and eerie Garen! Excellent twist!! 🍋
Thank you so much!! ☺️
That's trippy and surreal. I thoroughly approve!
Thank you, Evelyn! Happy to add a little surrealism to your Friday. 😃
Fantastic! Howard is an amazing character, so repulsive and yet so sympathetic. I loved the devilish little girl with her lemonade stand, just for him.
Thank you, Liz! I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
This is fantastic.
the heat must be drawing up strange powers today...everything ive read today had been excellent
and this is no exception.
what a perfectly sinister story...perfect internal logic
perfectly damaged characters
the mysterious child setting me off on a fearful path only for the true story to spring its terrible surprise.
One that MUST BE READ TWICE.
thank you 😎
💛💛💛 Thank YOU!💛💛💛
honestly …. that story is superb
oh my god this is horrific! unforgettable character.
Eep! Thank you, EJ! I was a little worried about this one. Glad it made an impression.
Whoa, this is creepy! Great job!
Thank you! 🙏 💛