The crow was in charge the whole time. The protagonist was under the crow's spell. I think the crow has a lot of power and crows have been proven to be very smart animals. Maybe they're smarter than we realize. Great story.
I love the feel of this and the dark dark poetry. the themes of the crow and the sailor and mysterious needs and omens and things under the skin and the limbo between life and death where souls live
i cant really fathom what is going on and the connections between the characters and if one is the other or not at all but its a delight to read it nonetheless.
This was beautiful. The imagery of nature was especially compelling.
Thank you so much! 🙏
The crow was in charge the whole time. The protagonist was under the crow's spell. I think the crow has a lot of power and crows have been proven to be very smart animals. Maybe they're smarter than we realize. Great story.
Thank you, Parker!
That was darkly beautiful and it read like a song. The child and the unknown father in parallel. And the use of the crow. Well done, you two!
Thank you so much, Lyndsey!
Thank ye kindly 🤠
Beautiful.
Thank you, Hanna!
I love the feel of this and the dark dark poetry. the themes of the crow and the sailor and mysterious needs and omens and things under the skin and the limbo between life and death where souls live
i cant really fathom what is going on and the connections between the characters and if one is the other or not at all but its a delight to read it nonetheless.
Glad you liked it :] if you want to know what our thought was, it was that the child digging is the daughter (I pictured daughter) of the sailor
Thanks, Nick!!