I kind of knew your ending would be wonderful and I wasn't wrong! All of it was such great writing and I enjoyed every minute of it.
Your ending was really satisfying too. Not just all the strands tied up but new beginnings, and I am glad Blythe survived. I was getting quite fond of her by the end. It was all very liberating - for all the characters.
I'm so hoping there is more where this came from because I think you've created a beautiful world here.
Thank you very, very much for this story. I loved it. Then again you kind of knew that by now, eh!
Evelyn! Your support of my words has been such a gift! I'm so grateful for your time and attention, and so happy that you've enjoyed this story. Thank you, thank you!
You are very welcome as always! I really did love it. I hope you could maybe think about actually publishing it as well - this would make an excellent illustrated story. The other option is the graphic novel thing, although there are so many wonderful descriptive passages that would possibly be lost in a graphic novel but which deserve to be kept. So I'd go down the illustrator route myself.
Anyhow - now I've finally reached the end I can catch a few breaths!
I kind of knew your ending would be wonderful and I wasn't wrong! All of it was such great writing and I enjoyed every minute of it.
Your ending was really satisfying too. Not just all the strands tied up but new beginnings, and I am glad Blythe survived. I was getting quite fond of her by the end. It was all very liberating - for all the characters.
I'm so hoping there is more where this came from because I think you've created a beautiful world here.
Thank you very, very much for this story. I loved it. Then again you kind of knew that by now, eh!
Evelyn! Your support of my words has been such a gift! I'm so grateful for your time and attention, and so happy that you've enjoyed this story. Thank you, thank you!
You are very welcome as always! I really did love it. I hope you could maybe think about actually publishing it as well - this would make an excellent illustrated story. The other option is the graphic novel thing, although there are so many wonderful descriptive passages that would possibly be lost in a graphic novel but which deserve to be kept. So I'd go down the illustrator route myself.
Anyhow - now I've finally reached the end I can catch a few breaths!
Thank you for sharing this story, Garen! I loved the escape from reality. You have such an amazing talent! 💗
Thank you SO much!! Your kind words are appreciated more than you know!