💜 "When my eye caught the shimmer of Pirri’s scales, my heart gave that little flutter, a firefly blinking out a love note in the hollow of my chest." 💜
So many beautiful lines! I love this couple with all my heart, which you have shattered into tiny pieces and fed to the gators.
Touching and atmospheric. Romantic and sweet despite the terrifying surroundings. Broke my heart.
💚💚💚 thank you so much, Lyndsey.
💜 "When my eye caught the shimmer of Pirri’s scales, my heart gave that little flutter, a firefly blinking out a love note in the hollow of my chest." 💜
So many beautiful lines! I love this couple with all my heart, which you have shattered into tiny pieces and fed to the gators.
💚 🐊 I wanted them to have a happy ending but it just didn’t work out. Thank you, thank you!
Life is hard in the swamp!
this is so gorgeous. eerie, heartbreaking and poetic. and the anagram device is very cool. well done!
Thank you so much, EJ!
There was a point I think about halfway in where I suddenly thought 'ah - they're cats aren't they?'. But no, I'm guessing they are in fact human.
It's still a great little story though. I really liked it.
I love the idea of them being cats. Maybe something for another tale. 😸
Loved this story! This line really stuck with me, "I think I loved him from the moment that fat finger hit the floor." :)
Thank you so much, Carrie! I like that line too. 👉🏻😬
This was so good!
Thank you, Erica! It was a fun theme. Is there someplace where we can see the other stories people created for this event? I’d love to check them out!