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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

I like that painting... (as you would've guessed).

I had to take a few moments to work out your story though, as your ending was so abrupt. I get it now, though - the 'invisible' line being the important one, I mean. Nice one.

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Garen Marie's avatar

Yes, rather abrupt but I also didn’t want to drag it out and make it too obvious. It’s a fine line. Thanks for reading!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oooh. Nice ending!

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Garen Marie's avatar

Thank you, Leanne!

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